My online diary

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shahhossain

, قسم أراكانيون حول العالم والقسم الإنجليزي
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My Dear Friends
Brothers and Sisters

Here, I am going to start a new topic. I named it (MY ONLINE DIARY). In this diary we will write about anything about life, peoples, friends and some past memorable experiences.
I got this idea from another English forum, But changed it into more sophisticated online interaction method for practicing writing and expressing skills.

To keep the place clean,
We should follow some rules here:
Here you can write anything as long as it is not harmful to anyone.
We will not chat here.
We will not comment or reply on others post.
We just write what we want and feel it and we can write short original stories, jokes, about lives, schools, peoples and friends, hopes, lost and founds.
Lastly, Please no COPY+PASTE things here.
You want to write from your head only.

From this method, you get the freedom of writing your past memories and sharing with everyone.

I hope You will like it

MY ONLINE DIARY

 
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اسم الموضوع : My online diary | المصدر : The English Section

shahhossain

, قسم أراكانيون حول العالم والقسم الإنجليزي
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OK. Hope you like it.
Now , I am starting first

Here goes my first post
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Hello my dear online diary
Today is Monday
It's 2nd November 2009
time 10:05 p.m.

Finally, I felt like found a place where I could write what my heart just playing.
maybe longtime ago I wanted everyone to hear that tone of my heart.
But peoples don't like to share truly
So I kept silent all the time

Finally I feel like here is the place , where I could write What I want
and share with everyone
ATLAST

Last thursday it Rained in Makkah
Ohh, so good it was
It's hard to express how I felt
Every rain drop where dropping like fresh and cool flowers on my skin

even the air was so breathing taza and refres hing

I didn't go to my work that day and I was sitting in home welcoming the rain.
after a little while I could not sit infront of the window anymore.
took an old broken umbrella from a corner and went out.

The umbrella was just an excuse to moisten myself

playing with the umbrella
i started walking to the bridge where me and my friend used to sit on.
I had no plan to go there.
But a force was just pulling me to that point.

it was still raining and by the time I reached the bridge, I was completely wet.
On the bridge there was a small tree, now quiet big.
Me and my best friend mohammed used to sit under that tree.

I still remember so clearly that
last time we were sitting here and it was raining,
cool air in the morning 6 a.m.
It were raining with full blowing air on my face.
wow. so dear that moment for I still remember.

When I was on the bridge, looked for the tree and sat under it same like before.
After a while, suddenly I felt this extreme loneliness.
tonight I am alone and
there's no mohammed with me.
It was dark after maghrib
And I could see the thunder lights in the sky.
Sometimes I feel good
and sometime I am scared.
cool rain drops were coming on my face with the help of strong air.
Still I am holding the Umbrella
But in this rain, no use of it.
A deep sadness fell on me.
And I was like a rock and could not move a bit.
I could hear the sound of tree leaves hitting each other.
I could feel the strong cold air traveling on my back.
BUt I could not feel Mohammed beside me.
It was like he is going to come after a while.
It was like I was waiting for him.

Last time I sat with him where on his bed in the NOOR HOSPITAL before 4 years ago.
He had a nasty disease in kidney
I exactly don't know.
He has gone to Allah forever.

He was a friend
Best friend
I can't forget him
I think only I had a friend like him
But he is gone

 

shahhossain

, قسم أراكانيون حول العالم والقسم الإنجليزي
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What?

Nobody wrote anything

are the shy to write or they r just ignoring

ok.let me think positively

maybe they are still thinking what they will write
i wonder what

anyway, sooner or later they will write
i am sure about that

saying that even i could many things from out of nothing

you dont have to think to write a story

start with any topic

start while u were drinking a cup of tea

say someting about the most wonderful place u ever travelled

let me give u an example of writing from nothing

right now i am sitting in cafenet
before few hours i was so tired
now i am fully in motion
and making tap tap sound from my keyboard

did u see that
its so easy to write anything
 

miss_mary

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Pearl Of Gulf
Why no body is taking part in this thread??
Are tey really trying to avoid this topic?
 

shahhossain

, قسم أراكانيون حول العالم والقسم الإنجليزي
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Miss Mary

Thank you so much for being the first one to post a comment in this topic

Infact, I was worried about this topic

I could see that peoples coming and reading
and going without leaving any comment

These kinds of actions leads to many thinking like:
Maybe people not understanding
Maybe they are ignoring
Maybe they don't have time to read this long and comment back
Maybe they felt bored and slept on the keyboard
Maybe they are still thinking what to write
Maybe they are confused like you said
and don't know what to write

I have even noticed that Mr Barhum wrote something here
and within a moment deleted it

I got a notification about this action in my email

Anyway, Thanks for letting me know that you are confused

I have a problem
And that is not common with lots of peoples.
I like writing so so much
But peoples are are so lazy that they don't like to read.

I write
but
they don't read

When they see long long writing
they feel scared and run away

Thanks for letting me know that you are CONFUSED
I am happy for atlast someone is confused AT LEAST

That's a good leap

Now I am going to explain you more about this topic

Once I was surfing some english forums for getting new ideas
for our English forums
There I seen this topic about
MY ONLINE DIARY

If you want to improve your english
written and spoken
then you must practice both WRITING AND SPEAKING

I know that most of our brother and sisters in the forums are very
weak in English
Some needs very hard practice

So, I started this topic to write what you have in your heart

I just write anything you want

It's like a diary
but everybody is reading that

You can write

About your ideas for improving our community
About your journey to a beautiful country or place
About your feeling for a person or a thing
About you dreams and fantasies
About your loss or sharing happiness
About advising someone for something

so so many things

limitless

This is not a CHAT
You don't have to wait for other's comments

You just write what you want and others will read it

What is the benefit?
You can write in english easily
you learn more new words
you can type speedily in english
or one day maybe you become a famous writer
anything is possible

did you see that?
again I wrote a long lecture
 

bozrok

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ksa
What?

Nobody wrote anything

are the shy to write or they r just ignoring


Dear SahHossain
I left my comment here before Haj as well as our sister OmHani
but today when I checked the comments I didn't find it
I think someone deleted our input

 
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shahhossain

, قسم أراكانيون حول العالم والقسم الإنجليزي
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30 أبريل 2009
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Dear Brother BOZROK

Thank you so much for commenting back on this topic.

I really expected that you will reply after what I wrote in my last post above.

You are right
I got a notification in my mailbox saying that you posted something here.

But when I came to read this, I found nothing.

About om hani
I didn't see anything either

I really don't know what or where is the problem,

And beside that I am the one only who manages this English forum.

I should not think more before I start thinking bad about others.

Anyway

Please PLease please
Start posting your last comment or story again

Thanking you in advance

Yours

Shahoo
 
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